Teenagers!

"Take it easy, man!" approach, carefree attitude
Enormous potential, though never explored

Enigmatic looks, mind-boggling expressions
Novice methodology, impervious to insults
Ambiguous acts...passing over head,
Grumbling about every other mess
Elusive studies, never mind
Relaxing sports...music flying
So what else is wanted, it's the best of life!!!

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An acrostic!

A contest entry

teenager drama s and feelings by trace3grls. 450 points, ended June 11, 2007, 12 entries
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Flowergirl
August 31, 2008
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very good short and to the point i loved it keep it up this fits all teenagers..
- Madhumita
  September 1, 2008
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  oh..ty so much 4 ur very encouraging comments!
EatYourSunlight
June 24, 2007

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yayay someone who isnt writting something deppressed, which makes me deppressed more. Thank ya! i like it, its funny and witty
PEACE
LaurenLightning--x
June 17, 2007

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This is beautiful!
You really have captured a teenagers life so well.

Thank you for entering and good luck!! :]
trace3grls
June 11, 2007
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so true great write...gl
AliceinPoetryLand
June 9, 2007

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Nicely done I think you have captured a teenagers life so well. So many things happeneing at this time of life.
All the best to you
Gaylene