Today you stood in front of me,
Your blue eyes locked with mine.
Too close warned my heart,
But my head said you'll be fine.
Listen to my heart and get hurt over again?
Listen to my head and get fucked over in pain?
Touching my earrings you giggled,
Since when do boys giggle baby?
You claim to be a man now,
You still look like a boy to me.
Your'e not a man with your girl laid flat.
You are just a boy and a foolish one at that.
I looked at you and realized today,
You make me happy but rage fills my head.
I can't stand your smile but I always smile back,
Bled all you like I'm in love with red.
Red is the opposite of the colour of your heart.
Bet you told your girl that you'd never be apart?
Want to make me happy then get the fuck away,
Your smile and your laugh is pathetic and vain.
You've always loved yourself and your girl,
I guess it's a perfect match,
You and your girl
&
Me in pain.
You and your girl under the bed sheets all night.
I'll be in a ditch from the ectasy hit that feels right.
One last simple message and it's pretty simple,
Answer my question and don't just walk away.
Was I just your innocent true love or more?
Was it easy to make your mind up in under a day?
Peer pressure is a bitch and you don't know how it feels.
But baby I do because our reality finally feels real.
Author notes
About my ex.
Lol. Random Title.
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Your'e not a man with your girl laid flat.
You are just a boy and a foolish one at that.
i like thoughs lines. everything fits together really well thank you for enterinng my contest. -
Ouch this piece has much pain and suffering and I am sorry that to experience this. Well written with much emotions you did a good job capturing me with this piece
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WOW!!
Great write!!
Thanks for entering my contest..& Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
"Touching my earrings you giggled,
Since when do boys giggle baby?
You claim to be a man now,
You still look like a boy to me.
Your'e not a man with your girl laid flat.
You are just a boy and a foolish one at that."
ya thats bitchin babe. lol but seriously, really good job love.
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Lol.
Those lines keep making me laugh
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