I look in the house
through the big window
see you sitting
where you always sat
like nothing ever happened
like nothing was broken
I hear the whispered words
that once were spoken
I hear the love in your voice
when your heart & soul
were generous & open
I cling to the ring
that meant so much
I close my eyes
remember your magic touch
I loved you so much then
now looking at you again
I know I still do
comes flooding back
when I look at you
so much more
than you ever knew
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - X- The dark side of love - X by The Hardest Goodbye.
340 points, ended July 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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AMAZING
thanks for the great entry in my contest
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a beautiful remembrance of love , we know its still there even when its meant to be passed..expressed reall y well ..peter
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Thank you Peter,you are very kind.xx
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"I hear the whispered words
that once were spoken"
I love those lines. very poetic!
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