My whole world was you
kept on clinging,didn't know what
else to do
You were my rock,so pure & true
nobody'll ever compare,nothing to match us two
Gotta let you live your life so new
the whole worlds waiting,in a long line
formed a f**king Q
There's Sam, Sally, Sarah
and probably a sexy Sue
all there waiting for you
to charm & whoo
In my jealousy,I sit & stew
the rest of my life without you
I haven't gotta clue
freedom forced upon me
given back to me from you
What am I gonna do
without you,without you?
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Me The Truth. Did You Ever Love Me? by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended July 12, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My Love Has Gone {{Pre-writes now allowed}} by PerfectImperfection.
975 points, ended August 21, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Jealousy is an initial instinct that comes from heart break - there are far too many 'what if's'. Sad and filled with an immeasurable ache. Thank you for your entry!
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wow my love!
this poem was just simply amazing i mean geezz i loved
it bunches i could feel each word as though it were
stright from your heart and this poem hit me hard not
that that is a bad thing it just means it is extra
good good luck in the contest lots of love..xoxox -
Good Rhyme
Try spell checking at least twice before you post.(I have to do mine like 10 times)This has a nice rhyme to it. not forced, it just flowes. Keep writing.
Joe
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