The crush that I have on you is killing me
It started out so lighthearted and innocently
But then began to alter and change by degree
Now not a moment goes by that its not in control
And to make things even worse its eating at my soul
This crush is turning into a monster, its very bold
It began with just that look into your eye
Now lingering with chains for a love tie
When trying to dismiss it, it told me bye
Theres no entry in the local phonebook
For a locksmith of this sort, I looked
I am in over my head, my goose is cooked
Everlasting crush,why'd you have to crush me
Is there anyway out, is there no possibility
To top it all off there's this awesome chemistry
Look at this silly crush that turned into a blockbuster
I'm all pooped out, disenfranchised and now I lack luster
Does anyone possess the number to the crush buster?
Author notes
Option #3 Crush
In a list
A contest entry
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300 points, ended June 8, 2007, 14 entries
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awesome
awesome! especially like:'Theres no entry in the local phonebook/For a locksmith of this sort, I looked'. love the image you conjure up with the lines about locksmith & unlocking your heart.great write! -
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TY
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you bust out some cool crushing rhymes here patricia...well done
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No Iggy No
You didnot repeat the word "Crushing" did you....hahaha TY
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loved this. this was great. these stanzas=wow
It began with just that look into your eye
Now lingering with chains for a love tie
When trying to dismiss it, it told me bye
Theres no entry in the local phonebook
For a locksmith of this sort, I looked
I am in over my head, my goose is cooked
good luck -
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TY
So much
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