Deception -- Stirs in the devils eyes
Bringing forth -- The irony of flesh eating flies
For he who controls the light with in hells gate
Will also ignite the flames on top of the lake
All the kings demons -- Will be forced to their knees
While the king sprays his evil seeds --
Into the fertile wombs of each of his evil queens
So it written, And so it's been said,
The tombs of demons -- Will be filled to no end
With the layered carcuses of weathered men...
Author notes
Tempt not a Desperate man " William Shakespeare"
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Deception -- Stirs in the devils eyes
Bringing forth -- The irony of flesh eating flies.
Great lines, I found these quite inspirational within themselves. I like the turnout of the quote and how you turned religion into the equation. I suppose temptation did start in christianity with that evil satan meddling... -
This makes me wanna dance naked in the pale moon light with the wolf and the pack...pacing ready for a feed...mmm can almost hear the neighbours scream with fear, love the dark Hun. keep it up and good luck in the contest
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oh bunny blue amazing words you shower us with hun you got the pack all excited
I feel a song in the making just one complaint not long enough gimme more i want more this is brilliant..been awhile since i felt this much pleasure like all animals spray their territory warning off those who they feel will threaten yeap the actions of desperation feel you have captured this very well here hun just wish there was more .... am learning to really love walking in your dark.good luck in the contest.
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