When you came in my life with an entire earth of fun
I couldn't see anything but you
When I felt you around me
My senses could feel nothing but you
You blinded my eyes with love hue
And I saw everything according to you.
When you appeared before my eyes you left me breathless
I could feel all the beauty in my possession
I didn't care to care about anyone but you
And you left me all alone
Life tells me this is only true.
When you left me motionless and numb
I wasn't in my senses
I didn't know then I was still alive but without feelings.
You didn't ask me to love thee
It was me and only me
Who went in possession of thee
Surrendering my entire existence
It wasn't you rather it was me
Who crossed the fence for thee.
A contest entry
- regret by aliceramone.
500 points, ended June 8, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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regreting...touched my emotions.
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a good write filled with emotions and regret, thanks for entering this piece and good luck in the contest
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