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[ Self - Validity ]

 

 

 

[ She Said to Self ]

after steam wiped from glass,
image slightly distorted
from what she perceived self
to be
and what ears listened to
when words escaped loose lips;

left dents in Dreams,
hole in ground to fall, face first
into puddle of perception.

Spectators observed,
chuckled loudly after accident
but in heat of that moment
forgetting
they made similar mistakes.

Perfection practiced till exhaustion
waved white flag
yet not reachable in reality
for nobody on Earth embodies
that mold.


[ She Said to Self with Validity ]

in front of full length pillar
which cast harsh criticism
many times
once cloth pieces fell to floor
or pounds gained;
clothes no longer fit.

How the physical changes
on the outside
did not determine
who she was on the inside.

She set Mind to strip the negatives
from vocabulary so voice,
verbal and or physical
had representive come through
with Dignity next to Self- Love; 

Loud enough for everybody to hear-

Her feet felt pressure to stomp
instead stood on tip of toes
gracefully as she carried herself
across the floor, smile of accomplishment
to Light naturally the entire room.

Eyes widened, shoulders adjusted
with Confidence on her team
while worthless sat on the sidelines;
not to be played again.

Finally, she became somebody
where consciously, thoughts said:
there was nobody.

Higher Powers provided the near perfect branch-

so the caterpillar that wanted to emerge
from her self-made cocoon
became a priceless butterfly.

 

 

 

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Hopefully this brings forth an Inspiring Smile~~
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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 19, 2007

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    Thank you, Desire, for this poem. I so often feel that sense of worthlessness and despair. You hit the nail on the head, as far as I'm concerned. I'm going to do my best to stand worthy within myself, and leave worthless far behind.


  • StarEyes
    June 9, 2007

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    How did I miss this one? This is amazing!!!!!! What a great job you have done on this one! And the message in it is just remarkable!!! Amazing my dear friend!!!! Best of luck in this contest!!!

    and much love always

    Nettie


  • Lauren Noir
    June 8, 2007

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    This is incredily beautiful
    The pictures went perfectly with it
    And the words were so inspiring
    The power in your verses were utterly beautiful
    I was lifted with you majestic words
    Well done
    And good luck
    I love, I love

    All my love


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    "Her feet felt pressure to stomp
    instead stood on tip of toes
    gracefully as she carried herself
    across the floor, smile of accomplishment
    to Light naturally the entire room." WOW!!

    This was an inspriational and impacting piece. Lovely penning, your structure is inviting and your words are captivating The inspiration picture...now as I typed this, it seems the picture came after the write, but none the less...Breathtaking! Loved it ~Tia


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!

    If one tries hard enough they can overcome others insincerity and cruel ways. They stay strong and true they can find the beautiful person they have hiddend within.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 8, 2007

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    Deeply meaningful and well done. This is an open book awaiting recognition Woot! heck of a piece.


  • Bedroom Eyes
    June 8, 2007

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    This is wonderful!

    "Her feet felt pressure to stomp
    instead stood on tip of toes
    gracefully as she carried herself
    across the floor, smile of accomplishment
    to Light naturally the entire room."

    Like Sunshine, she lights the room with her confidence & dignity Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest!!!


  • copypastedelete
    June 8, 2007

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    That was awesome. I hope you win the contest. A beautifuly penned work. Goodluck. I antisipate a high five moment on June 20.


  • Angels Delight
    June 8, 2007

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    Amazingly Beautiful

    I started reading this and my first thought was I am either going to be disappointed or I am going to be bowled over at the end and I am very happy to say that this did bring an inspiring smile as you would call it

    It was such a great way to illistrate the harshness of people and the ridicule we all have suffered but the difference in this one was that she stood up tall and proud and that made her unique and special

    Thank you so very much for entering my contest...I wish you only the best of luck

    Much Love
    Tes


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    June 8, 2007

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    such a beautiful message penned here, bringing forth the power of our own inner light and eliminating preconcieved misconceptions so our soulful wonder stands true.


  • Quiet places
    June 8, 2007

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    Breathtaking!

    I love this message~!! Drawing start to finish and the depth of emotion felt strong. Could relate so well to the thoughts and words of the writer. Giving new life to the weiry and an excellent new life at that. Fantastic poem. Love the imagery that makes a spectacular entrance and stays fo the finale! As always, a masterpiece has emerged! Thank you for sharing my dear! Your pal, Don


  • penman gold member
    June 7, 2007

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    Excellent

    Very insightful and provoking. Another gifted expression so full of light from you golden pen. Good luck in the contest.

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