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mats

sigh;
breaths short lived are pulled out from lungs
head first, like a forward dive.
resembling thread drawn off a spool.
they wind around your head: a halo of regret
hovering with hapless nostalgia.
graceful jealousy provokes you to jump.
to submerge onto shallow concrete.
perched like a bird atop of an arm,
balanced and steady,
you fly.
bracing yourself for fierce wind.
weather mocks you.
concrete greets you.
sigh.
welcome.

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  • The Burning Year
    June 14, 2007
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    their song "Trouble" is one of the best songs ever
    the video is really cool too
    but um..yea
    I like this
    there is a lot of imagery here
    and this line

    "head first, like a forward dive."

    is the only line that could ever describe the speed of my life when it forgets me...my life..forgets me
    *short laugh*

    oh well...


  • changeisconstant
    June 8, 2007
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    i adore this, and youuuu.