A window pane, a slash of glass across,
Will act as if a lens to focus light-
It's splaying spotlights on my love's sweet site,
And focusing the view of my eyes' cross.
It's staring through a film that's like emboss,
Distorted, so I fall into drugged night,
A happiness, so warm, makes life alright,
And so, a switch of change, I, eager, toss.
I cannot hope to fix my life with love,
But only through that love can joy be made-
A newfound revelation sweeps the mind.
With signs of joy, some laughter and a dove,
And even though I feel a bit afraid,
I harness love to break glass which once shined...
A contest entry
- BATTLE OF SONNETS ROUND 2 by mamad.
550 points, ended June 19, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nice, I like your imagery
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Incredible
This is a very beautifully penned stunning poem and I really love your opening line and its just an awesome poem. I really love how you penned away this very beautiful Sonnet. keep up the very good work and keep on penning away
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