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These Walls

These walls are closing in on me.
To my right and left are corpses.
At the front and back are eyes,
Watching me dig tunnels
Towards my own demise.

It's a room without any windows,
But on the ceiling there's a door
That can only be opened in
By an angry god of war.
These walls are closing in on me.

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  • Shakes-spear
    August 20

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    sad

    i can understand the feelings as I did feel this way before. I hope that things have changed for you. Good luck and have a great day! The Shaker