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Nobody

Nobody Knows Me
Nobody Cares About Me
Nobody Needs Me
Nobody Wants Me
Nobody Likes Me
Nobody Loves Me
Nobody Would Talk To Me
Nobody Feels The Way I Do
Nobody Wants To See Me
I Know Nobody
I Care About Nobody
I Need Nobody
I Want Nobody
I Like Nobody
I Love Nobody
I Would Talk To Nobody
I Feel The Way Nobody Feels
I Want To See Nobody
If Only I Could Find…
Nobody

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  • Stone Guardian 1991
    June 12, 2007
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    Pretty good. A bit on the depressing side though. But still very well written


  • Dirty and Broken
    June 10, 2007
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    i like this, and the ending is ironic...
    the repition is kinda annoying, but not too much...


  • leccator
    June 8, 2007

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    sad

    Take this poem, reverse it like I love nobody and put I love everybody and just do that with the whole poem and read it and see what you think.


  • BornWithAPen
    June 8, 2007
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    Very very nice

    Xena
    i really like this, in particular the way you show why you feel that you have to be independant and rely on nobody, i think showing both sides the way you did is a really good way of letting us all see how we recat when we get hurt.
    Michael


  • Tortured Poet
    June 7, 2007

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    wow

    whoa this is an excellent write, u definitly put how u feel out there. I especially love how u ended it, it kno wat nobody feels like sometimes.

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