I feel faded and jaded
Hurt and frustrated
Torn apart and ripped in half from what you did to me
How could you take my heart and crush it without any feelings
You make me sick, you make me mad
You brought me down and made me sad
You discust me and Distrust me, your the worst kind of girl
Your the one that broke my heart infront of the world
Never speak to me don't even say my name
Don't you ever look me in the eye don't lie to me again
I hate you more then anything i Hate what i've become
You've knocked me down too many times look what i've done
I hope you get it back i hope someone breaks your heart like mine
I hope you feel this pain one day I hope they steal your shine.
As your falling through the depths of hell
Think of me as your raped by Satan's tail
The burning lake is full of bitches like you
"One more for the fire", said the demon to the crew
Burn mother fucker burn mother fucker burn!
Lie to me now slut, it's your turn to hurt
Who am I kidding your never going to die
You'll forever be a scar across my back, deep in my hide
I'm bleeding from your memory and cursed from your name
Get out of my head dammit, leave me alone today
Love is for fool, this is what it will do
Thanks to love i'm willing to kill everybody and you
Thats right you, sitting there at home alone
Reading this on your computer wondering when i'm done
Thanks to love i would gladly take your life
I hate everybody, I hate the day and the night
don't fall for love, don't fall for lust
stop reading this now before the screan busts
I'm red with anger, and a stranger i'll bring to death
With my machete and my hatchet I'll make a wonderfull mess
Monster of Love is not just a legend to tell
It's a beast of rage coming straight from hell
Author notes
For every girl that ever broke a mans heart and expected him to "Deal" with it. There are millions and millions of people in prison who when you hear the story's of there violent crimes against mankind, it all started with a story of love. Love Kills
A contest entry
- She sits in her corner singing herself to sleep wrapped around in the promises that no one seems to keep. by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended June 22, 2007, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Angry Anyone?? by A-Daisy-Among-Roses.
900 points, ended December 6, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LOOKING FOR WRITES ON LOST LOVE by kaylalala.
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THis is fantastic. I love the ending where you talk to the reader. this is ......wonderfully written. Great work.
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Nice piece... because of so many entries.. I am quick commenting... here is your score...37... thank you for entering and participating in my contest.
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awww babe. you have to know that not all girls are like that, that girls can be ok. guys dont all exactly have the best reputation either. but i think that there might be some out there...some that are ok. i just think you need to keep an open mind. just protect the important parts...the parts lovers hurt the worst.
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It sucks that guys like me only end up with the bad girls that ruin it for the rest. At the same time all bad guys make it hard for a guy like me to get a good girl.
I got a really good girl right now and even though i don't get too see her she makes me really happy
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Wow you were really hurt. Im sorry
Life is not always easy and neither is love. Thank you for adding your poem to the contest xxxx Best wishes
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Wow this is some deep stuff its actually really kind of sad but hey if thats what love does to you than all i have to say is youll; get over it but um good job and good luck in my contest also you caught me off guard with the beginign of the second paragraph
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PS, too man girls destroyed my beleive in "love"...I'm willing to give it a chance once in a while, but i'm not jumping in headfirst anymore
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Thank yo very much, i hope i do well. What caught you off guard in the second paragraph?
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~Good Luck~
A really strong message yet with rage. Telling me the heart has been suffering for a long time, and that's not that great. Really enjoyed this piece!! Thank you for entering I appreciate it, God Bless
♠S~
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I understand this feeling, and I am not a man. However, actual Love can be quite sweet. The emotion that fuels people to hurt wears a sick mask of Love. At least I think so.
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Nothing feels better then the "love" part of a relationship, but when it ends, it's the worst pain
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Amen brother.
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I don't think there is a man alive that can't understand this feeling
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