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While The World Stands Still

Where here, you and me

Togather forever 

With You

 

Stand Still, No matter where your going

I will always be here with you

 

With you....

 

How could I forget

Those lost summers times

No matter where I am

I was with you 

 

How could I forget

The dark cloudy sky

Where we laid on our backs

Watched the stars shine 

 

I Can't, I Can't

Imagine

 

The world with out you could be

 

I Can't, I Can Not

Describe

 

The love I feel inside

 

It builds up, holds down

Everything we have

 

It keeps me awake at night

you are all that I have

 

And While world stands still

I can't imagine being with out you could be..

 

With you....

 

While the world stands still

We're togather forever

We're as wild as the

Wind could ever be

 

While the world stands still

My heart's on fire

Burning, Beating

As can ever be

 

While i'm with you..

 

How could I forget

The first time

When we comfort each other

When the moon was bright as can be

 

How could I forget

The adventure of a life time

When we were just in our teens

 

I Can't, I Can't

Imagine

 

The world with out you could be

 

I Can't, I Can Not

Describe

 

The love I feel inside

 

It builds up, holds down

Everything we have

 

It keeps me awake at night

you are all that I have

 

And While the world stands still

I can't Imagine the world with out you could be

 

With you...

 

While the world stands still

We're togather forever

We're as wild as the

Wind could ever be

 

While the world stands still

My heart's on fire

Burning, Beating

As can ever be

 

With you beside me

I'm invincible

Indestructible

As could ever be

 

With you beside me

Everythings possible

I'm as tall as

I could ever be

 

With you...

 

How could I forget

The memories we shared

Where everything

Was perfect as can be

 

How could I forget

The pitch black darkness

Holding each hand

Though the night

 

With You... 

 

I can't, I can't

Imagine..

 

The world with out you could be

 

I can't, I can not

Describe..

 

The love I feel inside

 

It builds up, holds down

Everything we have

 

It keeps me awake at night

You are all that I have...

 

While the world stands still

your my destiny

loving you with

Compassion and love

 

While the world stands still

It was meant to be

You and me forever

Under the stary sky's

 

 

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 15, 2008

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    wow! this was wonderful! a lovely dedication... sweet poem! i love the repetitions in this poem... it's really powerful! strong emotions and gorgeous imagery!


  • jagchoir
    November 27, 2007

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    To me the poem was perfect, just like the rest of yours and just like you. =] I hope you call me soon, I can't wait to here your voice. Wow that sounds stalkerish but I miss you.
    -Always Chloe.


  • risewiththesmoke
    June 9, 2007

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    this was really powerful. i love the part that's like "i can't, i can't imagine..." i think you could improve the beginning tho... some of it seemed a little cliche and didn't really grab my attention right away. nice job tho... pce


    • dragontuba
      June 9, 2007
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      Well ya,,, I think its kinda cliche...I think I'll change it