Your artistry sooths my butterfly soul,
With fresh psalms of translucent gold
From glamour gardens of cosmic romance,
Blossom's blaze in destiny's dance.
Skies bestow, below misty, midnight blues,
With rainbow hymns of - "I love yous"
Your melody sings to my musing heart,
Love as us, shall never depart.
Earth Angels mend, bended paths of sorrow,
Healing through realms of tomorrow
Boundless beauty, where loyal love unfurls,
Softly, skipping, paradise pearls.
Upon liquid stages spirits reflect,
Our souls know yesterday's neglect
Let our travels remain gingerly new,
So we may gaze through wisdom's view.
Author notes
Thanks for reading us, always love and tenderness~
In a list
A contest entry
- Love & Commitment by Heavenly Angel.
500 points, ended June 10, 2007, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully Penned
This was absolute perfection! It flowed nicely and the message was recieved! The last stanza for some reason is my favorite, I think it's because it reflects how I feel at times. Again excellent write!
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~Dearest Timothy~
Congratulations on the Gold.
Remember me my friend and our butterfly soul.
Let my words caress you, when you’re feeling blue
Let my words be of comfort and healing to you.
“In that book which is
My memory . . .
On the first page
That is the chapter when
I first met you
Appear the words . . .
Here begins a new life”
- Dante Alighieri
~XXX Hugs and Love, Sharon~
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A born poet
your soul is poetic. Not many have these skills. It is like music. Thanks for sharing the beauty in your soul.
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Dear Jalollybad, Thank you very much from both of us. Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, ~Timothy and Sharon~
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Excellent
Upon liquid stages spirits reflect,
Our souls know yesterday's neglect
Let our travels remain gingerly new,
So we may gaze through wisdom's view.
Wonderfull soft rhyme
Love it
Rick
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where loyal love unfurls
This is so aptly worded to the theme,. I can't think of any words worthy of comment. Such tranquil shades of beauty found within every line and the soft sound of fluttering dreams captured in visions found. Blue
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way to go I am so proud of you this is a wonderful poem that is just so touching to read. You did a wonderful job.
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This is very beautiful and a joy to read!
Well done with this and thanks a lot
for sharing it here. Keep up the wonderful
work here!
Jeremy0826 -
how very beautiful this write from you is. thank you for sharing this with me. you have warmed my heart. viyanna rosemarie
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This is so wonderfully written and feeled with a love that never ends...Your melody sings to my musing heart,Love as us shall never part
O' so very sweet and thank you so much for sharing
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Beautiful
Very nicely written. Full of heartfelt love. I like
the last two lines in the last stanza. How wonderful to gaze through wisdom's view.
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WOW
My Dearest Uncle Tim
How you deserve only love and happiness...This was so beautifully penned and it sunk deep into every corner of my heart and there it will remain...
Your love is so special and you write it so beautifully. I want to thank you for sharing this with us
Love you always
You niece -
~Oh, my sweet lord this is beautifully penned my soul brother Timothy~
~Dearest Poeticweaver~
Might this line be “love as us, shall never depart.”
I love this gem filled poem with all my heart.
You’ve captured my wings with cupid’s dart.
Totally Cosmic… WOW… I just love you I do.
A thousand and one thank UUUUUU’S for all the beautiful things you do.
~XXX Hugs, Love, Kisses Sharon~
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Thanks,
I appreciate your loving touch
I as well love you so much
Thanks for always being true
And forever sing love me do.
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Sigh....
My sweet love brother, you and your collab partner penned a most BEAUTIFUL and awesome sharing!
I absolutely LOVE this! Thank you for sharing this with me; I love it!
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