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Winter.


Kissing your blue lips.
Winter freezing us into ice.

Black wandering thoughts.
Feverish visions enter my mind.

In deep woods, the dead of night.
Blurring my vision with snow so soft.

Bodies hold as coats, locked.

Dreams so numb I cannot hold on.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    I appreciate the sentiment here.
    I didn't get the wow factor I would have liked but at the same time it didn't mean it wasn't well done.