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Your My Little Sweetheart

Your my little sweetheart,
not so short and stoute,
your the one who
stopped my pout.

Every time I get all
steamed out, your
always the one who
makes me shout.

So Tip me over and
pour my love out.

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ya i was bored and for some reason i had "I'm a little teapot" stuck in my head so i hope yall like it.

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  • starXcrossedxlover
    June 18, 2007

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    cute, cute, cute. Very nice poem. At first, i was like, "wtf?" but then I actually read the whole thing, and now i understand lol. Great job
    -HD

  • Liquid memories
    June 7, 2007

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    hahaha you slay me.

    this was cute, and similar to one I wrote few months back, my little sweetheart. This was cute and caring. nice job.