Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Panther

Liquid black, shifting through trees
Moving silently, quickly, with ease
You'll never hear me before I strike
Beware my power
Fear my might

Hear my roar, I tell my tale
Full of mystery, joy, and dispair
The king of the rainforest has a hiden life
Filled with hatred
Abound in strife

What do you say to a creature so strong
That it brings tears to your eyes just by screaming its song
Can you feel my pain?
Can you hear my plea?
Someone
Anyone
Save me
Save me

Behind neon eyes I hide my fear
A simple trick I learn year after year
I wish to feel your warm flesh in my jaws
I want the sensation of your blood on my claws
Forget about the pain that I know
Only the bloodlust can grow, grow, and grow
I'll cover the pain with more and more screams
I'm just a bl;ack panther, torn at the seams

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 1, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Awesome work!!!

    Thank you for entering your poem in this contest, and I'm wishing you the best of luck!!!


  • extasy
    June 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    I like this poem, well done