Where do I go ? What do I say
What if this day…just fades away?
(whispers to pencil) So its up to you, little brother
Please tell this girl, that I really really love her
What can I do? I don't know what to say
I think that my voice must be fading away
(press it to paper) Please, little brother, please
Write me the words that can bring her to her knees
My pencil (My brother)
I love her like no other
But my voice has been fading
And I'm Sufficating
So tell her I love her
My pencil (my brother)
How can I think? There's so much to say
The minute I write it it all fades away
(Hands dripping, sweaty) Brother, tell me what to do
I don't know how to tell this girl the three words, I love you
My pencil (My brother)
I love her like no other
But my voice has been fading
And I'm Sufficating
So tell her I love her
My pencil (my brother)
This just isn't fair. I don't know what to say
I know when she reads this she'll just run away
My pencil, my brother
What Am I to do?
Just help me tell this girl
Three words
I LOVE YOU
My pencil (My brother)
I love her like no other
But my voice has been fading
And I'm Sufficating
So tell her I love her
My pencil (my brother)
Just help me, little brother
I love her, like no other
Author notes
Arty wrote the first stanza of this poem. I wanted him to take credit, but, like always, he refused...
I hope you like it...
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Abbi
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this is the best i've read in a while
i love it -
Great write i love the way you talked to a pencil it's different. Good luck
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This is wonderful. One of my favorite poems i've seen today. Great job.
-maddie
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very Good!!! :]
I like it :]
P.s WELCOME TO THE GROUP :]
♥--T.R;;
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