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Twinkle Little Star

Twinkle, twinkle little
star, How I wonder
what's my star?

Up above so worldly high
how you lit up
my lonely sky.

Twinkle, twinkle little
star you are the
one I fell for.

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ya made this up on my mind so sorry if it sucks

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  • forbidden-colour
    June 7, 2007
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    Awwh- I Love Nursery Rhymes Re-done!
    Theyre Great .x.

    Amazing!
    xx


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 7, 2007

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    I love the play on the old song, your the only one for me! Nicely done, so simple yet so full of love! ~Sie