The heart is a candel
It burns bright and strong
The beat is the wicker
The flame can't do wrong
The flame is like love
A pulse which never dies out
The wick, goes on forever
Never ending flame will shout
"I love you, like my flame
So energize me with your smile
Set the spark between us
And I'll burn the distance, make it worthwile"
Theres energy between us
So touch me and light the flame
Of love between us, and we will fight
Together as one, the flame we tame
And listen to the flame
Which burns across the heart
This flame is your life
And the love is the fire
And, the flame will flicker and shout
"I love you, like my flame
So energize me with your smile
Set the spark between us
And I'll burn the distance, make it worthwile"
Author notes
Love is fire, Option 1.e
I spent ages looking through the options to see if there were any which sent me off on one lol, and this one did that the best, i hope its the sort of thing you were looking for when you started this contest for this picture, i also got inspiration from the song Energize Me from Afterforever. I hope you enjoy reading this
A contest entry
- ◄Show Me What You Got!!► by Hebz.
425 points, ended June 8, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awwww.....
Very beatifully written poem with a smooth flow. the only line that seemed the least bit out of place is "And, the flame will flicker and shout" as i read into this the poem didn't really go into this line.great write though.
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awww this was a beautiful poem
i liked how you used fire like love
you used it well and i can see you got a honorable mention
keep writing -
your right you did go off on one!. i love this poem and it is so true but a flame can also symbolise life so maybe you should write another poem on a flame symbolising life. sorry just an idea.
i love the description in this one and it deserved its trophy. the wording was perfect and i love the chorus like bit!
another brilliant poem jem
bravo
keep writing and i will read
kelbornro
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Gorgeous. I loved it, every word. Was amazing and really jumped through the screen and tickled my heart.
Nicely done.
And congrats on trophey.
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Awwwwww! I love it! The image of love and the candle work so well together! The emotions and imagery are lovely and ... awwwwww!Lol. And well done for the trophey! U deserved it!
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Cool Job!!
Interesting as well...Very lovely...emotional & i like all of it
Best of Luck in the contest
GloriousGift -
I could tell what the song was before i lookedf at the notes, lol!
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