The Grumpy Old Cat
Sat in the shade.
Wachin' all the
little kittens playing in the sun.
He Says " In the sun you have fun.
But I have none"
The kittens say " Your just Grumpy Old Cat
That sleeps in a Hat."
"So I may be an Old Grumpy Old Cat
who sleeps in a hat.I used to be young.
Just like you and I did that to the old
Grumpy Cat.
Don't judge a person how they look.
A person can
be who
they want to
a persons a
person that way."
Please tell me what you think
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this is way cute, I would if it were me, change a few things. Just my op. (The kittens say " Your just Grumpy Old Cat
That sleeps in a Hat.")
I would have put an (a) in front of grumpy, ("So I may be an Old Grumpy Old Cat) I wouldn't have put old in front of cat,(A person can
be who
they want to
a persons a
person that way) I would have put something like, A persons a person no matter what! I still liked it, it was very cute. But the ends cracks me up the most because I thought you were talking about kittens and the old grumpy cat. keep writing and always share your poetryfriend Maryann22 -
very creative!great messege!
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this is real kool. keep it up!
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I am stumped. I can't get out of the tangle at the end.
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wow this is a great poem i like the end when you said dont judge a personn how they look.A person can be who they want to a persons a person that way.great job!always do your best and never give up!
sweetdancer -
i can tell you love cats, too. nice poem.
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cooleo,so cooleo
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Wow
I think the last 3 lines need a bit of adjusment but I have understood the message yo are sending here lovely job
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