I'm joining you in this infinity
I'm staying with you forever
In this silence and peacefulness
I'll not abandon this spot
Where you're laying folded
Breathless and cold
I am escaping from the world
I know it's something you always fought me over
But I can't go on without you
If you are to come out now
Out of your holy chamber
And if you are to join me here
Under this moon and sun
I'll go back and face the world
'Cause then you'll be by my side
Pushing me forward forevermore
If you'd only come back
My life would start again
But since you like where you are
Then here is where I'll exist
From now until forever comes
But if only
If only you'd come back
My life would start again
Author notes
It's just something out of my head like all my recent poems, maybe emptying things in other ways than direct thoughts. *shurgs*
Please tell me what you think
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"Under this moon and sun
I'll go back and face the world
'Cause then you'll be by my side
Pushing me forward forevermor" This write is powerful in the enmotions it send throughout its words with a feel of desperation we all feel when we lose a love. Under this moon and sun, I have always thought about the fact that no matter whwere we are in this life with love, the other one is always under the same moon and sun. Thank you for this read. I enjoyed it greatly.
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It says quite a lot
A good read for me. This captures my feelings and thoughts sometimes, but you are the one that penned it.
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Emotional
wow,I thought this had alot of emotion in it,lost love is so very hard, sometimes though it can work out in the end,I felt so much sadness within ur words..a wonderful write keep up the good work poet.
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VERY EMOTIONAL!
Ah, the pangs of losing a love, maybe not altogether but they have gone for reasons only they know for sure. We do go on but we always keep their memory close to our heart.
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