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excuse my reach

excuse my reach
it's very deep
it gets into your mind
inside your heart
a work of art
something that i find

excuse my reach
it's very deep
it gets into your body
i like your groove
the way you move
it hits me very oddly

excuse my reach
it's very deep
it gets into your life
if i had been
a better man
i would made you my wife

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kinda dirty, i know, i'm open to suggestions on more verses

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  • ShInE45DoWn
    June 11, 2007

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    i think the last verse would flow a bit better as "if i had been/a better man/you would have been my wife" but thats just me. we can always tweek 'em when we get the band together. lybro.