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Blessing for Grief

A short drop.
A sudden stop.
Thats all that is needed to end this hell.
I will feel no pain.
And if I do,
It wont compare to what I've gone through.
So if I shall die,
And some feel pain.
I pray to thee:
"Lord bless their souls,
And help them not to grieve.
For I shall have gone to visit thee forever more in the sky".
A short drop.
A sudden stop.
That is all that is needed to stop this hell.

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  • erininthesky
    June 8, 2007

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    This is a sad, but very good poem. I love it. It really shows some deep emotion here, and some passion. Great job! ♥ Erin


  • I Am Gun
    June 7, 2007
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    this is my favorite so far i'm glad you changed the errors... good job babe
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