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Extended Life

My heart is a bell
a constant ring
of life’s cryptic echos.

Whether a tinkle or clang
dispatches words to my pen
for scribing my book.
New pages add life,
prohibit a closing.

My mind is a candle
with constant flame
the while I’m writing.

Snuffed out I would be
if my pen became still.

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Lora

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  • Lilredlll
    June 7, 2007

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    Inspiring

    I like what you reflect upon in this poem. If writing gives us true meaning in life then write on my dear friend.
    Linda

    • Lora
      June 8, 2007
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      Thanks so much for the encouraging comments. Yours are always so sweet and uplifting. Lora


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 7, 2007
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    Lora, this is a lovely poem and yes...if we lose the poetry of one poet, we have lost a gift.


  • Calvin-Hobbes
    June 7, 2007
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    Peness

    • Lora
      June 8, 2007
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      Thank you so much for reading my poem and sending the applause my way. It is much appreciated. Lora


  • trytothink
    June 7, 2007
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    HE HE! I like the way you told how it is that writing is like you .. good write!

    • Lora
      June 8, 2007
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      Twunders, I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my poem. Thanks so much, Lora

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