Daddy remember the days,
When i was your little girl,
You were my idol,
You were my world.
Daddy remember the days,
When i wanted nothing more,
Then to be in your arms,
When i felt harmed or sore,
Those are all just memories,
We've grown apart,
With all your mental abuse,
Putting scars on my heart,
Those are all just memories,
I guess i'll just have to deal,
With a man who'll never change back,
I wonder how you feel.
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fuck you dad!!!!
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I wish you could be close to him once more, not enough people have a close bond with their families anymore.
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Wow, i am so sorry. This is a great poem. I love how you wrote this, it makes if feel so realistic, as if it is happening at the moment you read each line. Thank you for entering.
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This is a very sad and heart felt peice you have written here. I can really relate to this for my father behaved in much the same way, although I have noticed a significant improvment in his attitued towrds me sience I had a baby. He has not changed much though because my siblings who still live with him have told me so. Anyway back to your writting. This peice shows how you feel about this situation in the perfect way, it is sad and short like the relationship you have expeirnced. Great write and good luck in the contest! Oh and by the way this does not appear to be a rewards poem so please fix this in 24 hours or I will have to dq you from the contest!
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This is a sad piece and heartfelt as well. Who's really your daddy? Perhaps you may think it is the monster that you see but under every mask there is a face. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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Wow, I especially like the open-ended-nes
I can really relate to you here. My birth father abused me; mentally, verbally, and psychologically; from when I was a kid, until I turned 20 years old [this year]. he and my stepmother used to call my sister and I horrible names, say things like 'you can't eat that, you're not an athlete', or 'I wish you turned out more like so-snd-so's kid'. I was never good enough for him... I got A's, he wanted A+... I was an artist, and he wanted an athlete... It was just disgusting, especially hearing these things from someone who was supposed to love me, and as an adult, relationships terrified me, because I thought they would all be like him. Most of them were.
Sorry for the rant, but I just had to get that out... Props to you for being able to evoke that sort of emotion! And as the others said, you are never alone... Excellent job
Love and light always.
L.
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i know exactly how you feel, im not just saying that to be all like your not alone and im sorry and all this shit, but im fukin tellin the truth, i know exactly how you feel
great write
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Im so sorry baby...i know its rough, but I promise i will take you away from him one day.
I love you so much
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"I wonder how you feel"
just an idea
either way, this is a wonderful write. keep it up. there's so much emotion. i like it alot. keep writing and expressing.
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