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In the Midst of Shade

In the Midst of shade,
Where the Grass Retirement lies,
Where you lie in your hammock,
all alone,
With the squirrels,
and bunnies,
lie and think:
We're in the midst of Shade.

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  • On Frail Wings.
    July 9, 2007
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    nice piece. i like it. good luck


  • FieryHollow
    June 7, 2007

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    This is pretty good.

    I really think that this is an awesome piece of poetry. It really intereests me, even though I tend to write darker forms of poetry. Keep writing. Hey drop a comment on my page sometime.


  • Miss Chievous
    June 7, 2007
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    I think it's......

    Summer Like! Yay!!!!!