I think about him all the time
He is so cute, funny and intellectual
Not to mention, thoughtful and polite.
When we are together I feel like I can be myself
All my worries cease to exist
And I am engulfed in a rage of feelings.
Everything he says and does intrigues me
I just marvel over the idea of exploring more than just his mind.
Sometimes my mind plays out subtle fantasies.
I , however, controlled the temptation
For I do not wish to compromise my heart again
But according to a friend, whats wrong with a fling.
Each day we are apart I want him more and more
I cannot wait until we see each other again
Its the summer and the beach calls us all
So let the fun BEGIN!
Author notes
This poem doesn't even descibe the urges i have toward this kid. Man oh man...:3
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice. Relates a bit to myself, actually. You've described these emotions oh-so-well. A pleasure to read.
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Well, I hope it goes well for you. From what you say in this poem, it seems like you feel more than just 'urges' towards this guy. I agree with the lines
'I , however, controlled the temptation
For I do not wish to compromise my heart again'
It seems like you have the potential of building a good thing with this guy, more than just a fling...
Anyway, just my opinion, I like this poem, it's sweet and innocent and full of emotion. Great write and good luck.
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