For you,I'd cross the land of the dead
And walk the blazing roads to Avalon
If it could save you from pain and sorrow
I'd even give up eternity in heavens
To spend just 1 minute on earth with you
I was born to love you,as too shall I die
Please tell me what you think
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I love this. It was beautiful. I'm so glad you have founds someone so precious.
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"And walk the blazing roads to Avalon"... I don't know how you came up with this, but this is a big WINK to the past
One might think that your writing might be a bit rusty after such a long time of silence, but in isn't. Another great write !
The whole poems shows your love for her and once again its written the style I would expect from you. Good job
You're on a roll, don't stop writing
Grtz
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This was great; it had elements of light and love in it, but darkness gloomed through it as well. If you wrote this in a sms to her, i wonder how she reacted.
"I'd even give up eternity in heavens
To spend just 1 minute on earth with you"
So well formed, and so well written. This was my favorite part.
It's nice to see you haven't forgotten how to write .
Still are the king, always was .
Praise, for the king has returned
grtz
Tim
U4L
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