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Your Eyes

You hate me. I can see
it in your eyes. After
three years your eyes
finally tell me the
truth. But you say you
love me and that will never
change. It has changed.
I can tell. You try to
hide the way you feel, but
I can tell you hate me.
And I don't care anymore!

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  • trytothink
    June 7, 2007

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    Well gotta speak the truth sometimes! I hear you very much. Lies Lies Lies from the other side, wish they told the truth, before i set them aside.


  • Peter21
    June 7, 2007

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    It's important to stress pain and nothing should be left locked away. It only builds, when it's released, it just causes more pain. Good job!


  • militsu
    June 7, 2007

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    this ok
    i geuss
    not really poetry kinda just rantiing
    don't get me wrong is still gets it message across
    but like i said its more or less like talking then poetry