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Lion in the Cage

Free lion of the jungle caught in the cage,
Therefore he is full of rage.
He is pacing left and right,
The magic key can free him tonight.
Unfortunately he can not find the magic key,
So he remains the captive of the cage.

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  • rhondasail
    August 20, 2007

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    Hmmm...this feels more like a write of personal frustration rather than that of a real lion. Just an impression, but you have 'captured' the essence of being in a cage perfectly. Nicely penned. Peace, Rhonda

  • Leaving Today
    June 8, 2007
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    It is like the king of jungle is captured, cage is not his place. It's little intriguing.