NO HIDDEN GRIEF OR GREAT DESPAIR,
IF WE COULD JUST SMILE AT SOME ONE AND CARE.
DOES IT MEAN ANYTHING ONLY TO THOSE WHO DON'T STARE
AND CONDEMN GRACE BUT SEE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE TEAR.
HOW COULD IT BE OF COURSE IT'S SO
THIS IS ONLY HUMANESS AND THE WORLDS GREAT SHOW.
Author notes
JUST A LITTLE SPIRAL OF WORDS TO HELP IMPROVE WHAT WE NEED TO SHARE
A contest entry
- quickie 5 LINES...... by Lyre-Bird-.
480 points, ended June 7, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wel who is counting the lines, anyway, very nicely done here with apowerful message...PK
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and yes it is 6 lines.... rules were 5
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thank you for entering the contest.............
thank you for sharing your thoughts
best wishes and goodluck!!!!!!
Tracey!!!!!!!!!! -
Think this is six lines - one too many for the contest requirements. Sure you can edit this into five lines.
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