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Leak in the Sky

trickle into a blossoming bloom
drip down to earth's soil
release the pressure of the clouds
pour into a absorbent purity
cleanse the filthy pollution

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
    wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!
    Lyre-Bird- & freedom4me
    ............ Tracey .......


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    June 15, 2007
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    yes water the food of the planet . vivid and so few words ..revitalising food . best wishe .peter