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Extinguish the Flame

The world falls
to wash away these
slow motion nightmares

and extinguish the flame
of damnation

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
    wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!
    Lyre-Bird- & freedom4me
    ............ Tracey .......


  • Porcelain Princess
    June 9, 2007

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    This is a very short but very powerful poem. It seems as though you really put a lot of emotion behind this. Great work.


  • sheltered
    June 7, 2007
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    Thirty slow seconds of sinless succinctness.