Tears of Sky

Tears of sky falls from heaven
Soothing drops make me insane.
Whenever it comes takes all my pain.
Holding the hand of life I accept the blessing
My barren land again turns into green.

A contest entry

QUICKIE 5 lines by Lyre-Bird-. 480 points, ended June 17, 2007, 17 entries
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Lyre-Bird-
June 17, 2007

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thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!
Lyre-Bird- & freedom4me
............ Tracey .......
Leaving Today
June 9, 2007
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Does rain wash away tears or helps to hide them in it? lol nice poem, liked it.
Sabir Abdus Samee
June 7, 2007
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This is a good poem.The last two lines are the best.
- Shapla
  June 7, 2007
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  Thanks a lot for the encouraging comment.