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The Shower

Out shopping and down came the shower,
It drenched my dress and my soul,
nothing can be ever so pure
than this pitter patter
up against your skin.

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  • Florida Sunshine
    June 24, 2007
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    wow Nice job! Thanks for entering it in my contest Crimson! pleasure having you here!


  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
    wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!
    Lyre-Bird- & freedom4me
    ............ Tracey .......

  • jinxtaj
    June 7, 2007
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    I love this it is just as refreshing as the shower that you're describeing.