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The Gift of Rain

Wet pellets,
of sweet purity,
fall to the ground.

Mother Nature's gift,
to the thirsty Earth.

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Hmm, a poem about rain.

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  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    July 2, 2007

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    Wow im loveing your short ones, there kick ass!! For freck sakes where have you been all my life lmao. no no jk jk but yea, they area ll so good, your my poetic infactuation my rhyming addication lol but yea keep up the work..

    KAydee


  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
    wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!
    Lyre-Bird- & freedom4me
    ............ Tracey .......


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    June 8, 2007

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    Very Nice

    I like this simple yet complexingly cool poem rain is always fun to watch listen too as it soothe the inner rage within ones own world. any ways just a great imagery poem built around rain. keep up the very good work


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 7, 2007
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    Wonderful, to the point.


  • woodstock 69
    June 7, 2007
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    I love the rain...

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