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Tantrum

(Alliteration x Acrostic)



Sweltering summer sweats summon swearing,
negating nothings nearing Nirvana.
Inside instances infer intentions.
Angry atmospheric aerial acrobatics arise,
regaling refreshing relief.




©2007 rous
6-7-09

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
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