and as I stand in life's cup,
reaching up for faith and love
as water rises at my feet, to float
and grab the very best. Doused
and cleansed by god's drink,
relieved of pain to that I attest.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE 5 lines by Lyre-Bird-.
480 points, ended June 17, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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6 lines needed to be 5
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oops sorry 'bout that.
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very picturesqe! ic ould actually see an image while reading! well done to this very good write
all the best in the comp.
bobs x
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I love this to, very beautiful, Im looking forward to reading more of your work.
Goodluck in the contest. -
Oh my! Beautiful. You and I are on the same spiritual plane today. My daily poem is simular. I love this, I love your poetry and I love you.
Love,
Amera ♥
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very well done
life as a cup, a cleansing of the spirit, such a powerful metaphor for blessings and thanks, so very well done...PK
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Pkid, thank so much...your comments mean a great deal to me.
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