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A Thursday tale,

Thunder, so I was once told, was Thor with his hammer
driving across heaven in his chariot,
its iron shod wheels striking lightning from the track;
and the moisture which fell from heaven
was sweat from his hard-driven horses.

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering "quickie 5 lines' Rain.....
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