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~~~I will~~~




Mayhem expressions unite in nothingness
crashing down their rage on mortals.
Gentle smiles enlightened in confusion
as words chill the painful heartache.

I can breathe your fragrance...I will survive.












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I love rain!

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  • sheltered
    June 7, 2007
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    Very sweet poem. "Enlightened in confusion" I like the contrast. I hate rain.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    June 7, 2007

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    Very nice write...... love those 2 first lines.....
    thanks for entering and goodluck
    Tracey

    PS typo? - nothigness - nothingness