I remember the list above your bed
My name was on that somewhere
Followed by
I
♥
U
And the list of ways you tried to
commit suicide
Self harm ranked the highest...
It was always left you the worst babes
And I always found you
I lay here beside you
Your heartbeat is racing against mine
I wonder what drug your on this time
And what affect it's going to
have
on
me
I watch you insert the needle
It saves my life
But takes yours away
And I try to say
I
♥
U
Sweetie I ♥ U
I always have and always do.
I know you hurt cause I do too.
But I still sit here with you
And before my eyes i watch you
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Again.
Author notes
option 2.
topic suicide.
write me an amazing poem about someone you love wanting to kill themselves but you cant talk to them about it cause your not aloud too know and just having to watch them and not take action and they dont know how much u love them.
please some poeple choice this options its very important.
"I watch you insert the needle
It saves my life
But takes yours away"
Refers to the fact I have diabetes requirring needles everyday and they basically save my life but it takes my babes away....
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i really love this poem its in the finals goood work dal i really love it but hate it at the same time that your in this situation for real but i love when poetry is about something real goood work x
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