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If I Died Tomorrow

If I died tomorrow
may the tears that fall

be not for me, but for

the pain once caused

 

If I died tomorrow
learn by the tragedy
and judge not by the cover
but by the quality of one's heart

 

If I died tomorrow
I guess you did not
see that lonesome dove
weeping for her own
like I have for mine

Author notes

It is amazing how cruel and selfish acts
of another can destroy every bit of hope and faith
that one has.

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  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Excellent

    Oh my this was so overwhelming. What emotions you stirred. Truly is heart wrenching.


  • Endeavor gold member
    July 21, 2007

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    Excellent


    If I died tomorrow
    I guess you did not
    see that lonesome dove
    weeping for her own
    like I have for mine

    Very beautiful and sad words

    Well done

    Rick


  • Shawnnessy
    June 18, 2007

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    wow. this is so beautiful. you have been such a great poet, i cant believe i have percratinated so long on visiting friend's poetry. but not visiting yours is a mistake i feel much stronger than not visiting others. your pure joy to read.


  • Shakes-spear
    June 7, 2007

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    Acts of another should not waver your faith.

    We cannot control what others think...only what we think and I think your great! Don't listen to the other fools! LOL I love ya! Bubba


    • mypassion
      June 7, 2007
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      Thanks Bubba for the words of encouragement.
      I try not to listen and try to completely ignore
      but its not an easy thing to do, especially when it is
      your own flesh and blood that is causing this grief..

      love ya, sis

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