Caress my blood stained teeth
into your innocent proven neck
Lick the remainder off gently
and enjoy it sweetly
Listen to your sexy shreiks
of pain that turns to scars
sip down the luscious liquid
and feel its intoxication
Satisfying the savage beast
that feeds off of this relish
Drain ever bit of useless life
from this elegant cadaver
Slide the corpse on the ground
once the frenzy is completed
The lifeless eyes of terror
now restful and euphoric
but soon are reborn
and now live in a eutpian world
The body now owns the ground
it once was enslaved to
But the irrepresible craving
will engulf its helpless carcass
Author notes
The sexy dark and beautiful side of VAMPIRES...
A contest entry
- Deeper into the Darkness by Dark Soul Reaper.
300 points, ended June 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Dark yet Suductive
This is a those kinda suductive yet morbid poems. I was very impressed by the lymric and the rythem. Amazing, awesome and sexual. Gimmme more please.

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Loved it. The description was awesome. I like how you put this together. You kept it going and kept me interested the whole time. Good Luck.


