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The Craving

Caress my blood stained teeth
into your innocent proven neck

Lick the remainder off gently
and enjoy it sweetly

Listen to your sexy shreiks
of pain that turns to scars

sip down the luscious liquid
and feel its intoxication

Satisfying the savage beast
that feeds off of this relish

Drain ever bit of useless life
from this elegant cadaver

Slide the corpse on the ground
once the frenzy is completed

The lifeless eyes of terror
now restful and euphoric

but soon are reborn
and now live in a eutpian world

The body now owns the ground
it once was enslaved to

But the irrepresible craving
will engulf its helpless carcass

Author notes

The sexy dark and beautiful side of VAMPIRES...

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  • LAS Poetry
    September 3, 2007

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    Dark yet Suductive

    This is a those kinda suductive yet morbid poems. I was very impressed by the lymric and the rythem. Amazing, awesome and sexual. Gimmme more please.


  • Dark Soul Reaper
    June 7, 2007

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    Loved it. The description was awesome. I like how you put this together. You kept it going and kept me interested the whole time. Good Luck.