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Walk with me my little child

Walk with me,my little child.
I cant bare the pain any longer.

It drains my strength,
and weakens my mind.

Remember.
Holding anger is poison.
For hatred is a curved blade,
and the harm we do,
we do to ourselves.

Sacrifice is not to be regret.
If you sacrifice something,
you are not losing it.
You just past it to someone else.

Love is the only rational act.
Giving out love,
letting in it.
The important lesson in life,
for love always win.

Those were his last words.

The Sun had stop shinning,

the Moon mourned,

my world became black and cold,

now,that he is gone.

 

My love for him,
had become a lost love.
His memories became my partner,
Though life has to end,
but love does not have to.

Author notes

uhm...hope you like it...i just write like whatever comes to my mind...and uhm,those advise are from mitch albom...

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  • Lost In Dreaming
    June 23, 2007

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    Good job

    Walk with me,my little child.
    I cant bare the pain any longer.
    It drains my strength,
    and weakens my mind.

    i love thaty part--good luck in the contest


  • whiterabbit.
    June 10, 2007

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    I love this. It's amazing. So many great thoughts in here that really make you think. I really enjoyed reading this and I like it sooo much.


  • Cube
    June 7, 2007
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    Wow, nice job. It's actually quite similar to the songs interpretation. Very well done I liked it!