I am the shadow you cannot see
the cold you cannot feel
I am the hidden between the gaps
I am the creature so real
I feed off all of your pain,
breath from the sight of your death,
just because im so lonely
is in the shadows where i shall be kept.
The whisper that seems to follow you
The darkness that hides the light
Secretive with every way that i am
I creep around slowly at night.
I lurk behind all of the corners,
I shudder at the sign of hope
I sense the evil from you smile
Happiness i shall not show
I'm death with all of its wonders,
Torture with all of the pain
screaming to the dearest old devil
a life i shall live in vain
Author notes
well uhh im at school right now, cruising round this site, just thought i would enter, i hope it is up to your standards, not much but yer...!!! thanks
A contest entry
- Deeper into the Darkness by Dark Soul Reaper.
300 points, ended June 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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mmmm, now this is wtiting love it:
I am the hidden between the gaps
you are a talented writer
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That is deep. Beautifully written.
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Wow!
This is a really good poem. I loved it thoroughly. It was indeed well written!
Lotsa Smiles,
Sarah
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Nice. The opening kinda reminded me of a Metallica song. It's quite good. "I feed off all of your pain,
breath from the sight of your death,
just because im so lonely
is in the shadows where i shall be kept." This part kinda threw me off. Good none the less.
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