And darkness will fall tonight
and for once you'll treat me right
now there's no where else to go
now it's time to start the show
A betrayal of your trust
to satisfy my lust
and I really don't care
even in your feeble stare
If you want to know the truth
I loved you in your youth
and now to me you're all but dead
and nothing's left to be said
I'll never hold you in my arms
I'll just leave you on the ground
and forever you'll remain lost
and never again be found
Author notes
Entry for a contest. Date rape/murder dark enough?
A contest entry
- Deeper into the Darkness by Dark Soul Reaper.
300 points, ended June 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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dang
i think im scared of this one *cries* lol NO LEAVING Belle!
Love ~Belle
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Very nice. More then dark enough. Good luck in the contest.
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weird and inside my skull
I really like the wording and I read it twice as it stuck in my head and left a residual effect that rippled. A great read, keep writing.
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I'll never hold you in my arms
I'll just leave you on the ground
and forever you'll remain lost
and never again (be?) found
for the rhythm?
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