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Untold

Am started,
Long ago i was afraid
of letting go.
This woman inside me,
had so many dreams
she hid beneath shadows
beyond desires,
she was tied to me.
then and then~
many days have gone
am started

My story
unfolds in my imagination
from the little girl i were
to the woman i was
hapiness filled my days
and sadness faded in
the shadows of yesterday
I was truthful even
in my own deceptions
my beutiful life
my story

when I were
down I rose beyong
my own imaginations
I sought my own path
found it and walked
my shadow my companion
my strenth mine all
Iwere lost and searched
then and then~
I light i sought brighter
when i were

This journey
has brought me here
to where i was
my struggles my efforts
have bore me
lasting peace and hapiness
then and then~
am winding my tears erasing the fears
with smiles
i found it
where i wasnt looking


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  • Room without doors gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    Outstanding

    I liked how you expressed your feelings. We all make this journey through life and learn through our experience. This is full of detail. Growing up is never an easy process and I liked how you described your life and how you found strength. This is a thoughtful poem that finds self-acceptance and contentment.