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"Beyond the realms"

"Beyond the Realms"
By Michael J. Branch

Vision is the answer to many of our woes,
Not to look at, but beyond our foes,
It's not what's in the now that makes who we are,
It's only in our visions, of where and how far,

As clouds envelope our minds, and distort our outlook,
We must not be the pawn, but more alike the rook,
Move with sweet precision, a surgical embrace,
Look beyond the horizon, to another place,

We are only what we want, nothing comes for free,
So glide into the light, open your eyes and you may see,
Some times there are shadows, that often block the light,
But sometimes it is daytime, and sometimes it is night,

Have a little faith, within you musty soul,
Look out with a vision, that may make you whole,
Life is just a rollercoaster, constant ups and downs,
So why the sad face? your turn will come around.

Look beyond the realm of you mind my friends......

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  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 7, 2007

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    Your recent writes are philosophical, like you've been on a journey of knowledge and understanding. You've grown these past months into a mature young man who understands the world in which he exists, it's good to see the growth The rhymes are gentle and the piece flows well. Filled with thought and new-found wisdoms.
    Thanks for sharing, I hope you're well.
    La x